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Something was there for both of them.
As he looked into her eyes, she looked into his.
There in his eyes, she saw what she felt.
Did he see the same in hers?
With trepidation abound, who would be first?
Then he said, “I love you.”
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12 comments:
Aw I love a happy ending! Well done Ciara. x
That is a sweet 55, Ciara. Excellent job. :D I have mine up as well.
that is a moment fraught with tnesion isn't it? nicely done. :)
what a special moment it is... to know what is coming, yet feeling the trepidation building... It is just another world... another feeling altogether...
it's nearly electric - that exact moment the words leave your lips. very nice! happy friday :)
ake, james, lime, mona, phain-this was exactly how it happened b/t me and stinky :)
Ciara...
That was soooo sweet!
You are just an awesome writer!
Thanks for playing, and hope to see you sooner than Friday....G
Who makes the first move? Always an intriguing question! Well, as long as each gets what he/she wants. Good one. See ya.
Donnetta
Brilliant Ciara. Well done. Debs x
That is such an intense moment. You've captured it well in just 55 words. Well done.
-smarmoofus
g-thx. i try. :)
donnetta-thx...yes, it is. both are so nervous. and hey, it works out better if the other person feels the same...sucks when ya tell someone and they're not at that point.
debs-thx cheers xo
smarm-it definitely is...because it happened to me and i was debating whether i should say it, but then i saw that my husband looked like he was going to say it, then i waited lol
Loved the ending. :)
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